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I think what you posted was actually very logical.
However, consider this, suppose you were to create a
killer title? I ain't saying your information isn't good., but suppose you added something that grabbed
people's attention? I mean mates! need to share this with you!
| Adrex.com is a little vanilla. You ought to peek at Yahoo's home page and
note how they create article headlines to get people interested.
You might add a video or a related picture or two to grab readers
excited about what you've written. In my opinion, it might bring your blog a
little livelier.